What do you think of this rap?

On a scale 1-10, I'll rate your rap a 5. Reason being is because it rhymes first of all, and secondly it has meaning to it. You're speaking on a topic that's actually happening. Another reason why I give it a 5 is because it's not the kind of song I'll listen to honestly; no offense. Also, try to find some kind of rhythm because while I'm reading this rap, it seems more of a run-on to me.